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Kia ora. On the 11 of november we went to Wellington I am going to be talking about Thursday. On Thursday we went back down to the National library to see the real Treaty of Waitangi we weren’t able to see the real Treaty on wednesday but we got to see it on Thursday. About 30 minutes later we went to the westpac stadium. We met a man called Dave he showed us around the westpac stadium the locker rooms and the field but we weren’t allowed to go onto the field. The next activity we did was the weta workshop we had some people show us around and talk to us about some of the statues and characters. We learnt a lot about how to make things look heavy and real. We even got to look at some amazing swords and feel some of the examples of the characters they were creating. On our last activity we went to Capital E. Capital E is a place where you can go to film a movie or a tv show. We chose to film a tv show. Our tv show was called Eye On The Hive it was about the prime minister banning the internet. We all got rolls to play or be something. For The Eye On The Hive my roll was the location manager.

What do you think about my writing ?

Kia ora. This week in Te Ngahere we had an e asttle test. For this e asttle test we were writing about a Special place in our community. What I chose to write about was the the Waitangi Treaty Grounds. Here is my writing.

The Waitangi Treaty Grounds is a special place because in 1840 the first Waitangi Treaty was signed.That’s why there is a flagstaff there because that’s where the Treaty was signed.




Do you have a community place where your family can go to find out more about you town? For many families in Paihia it is the Waitangi Treaty Grounds because you get to know more about your town and more about the Waitangi treaty.




The Waitangi Treaty Grounds is special to the Paihia community because in 1840 the first treaty was signed in waitangi and the meeting house in the Waitangi treaty grounds was built on 1940 to mark 100 years since the treaty was signed. The same is true for Ngatokimatawhaorua the waka.




The Waitangi Treaty Grounds is used to keep history and to help us kids learn about the treaty.




Why the Waitangi Treaty Grounds is there because the first treaty was signed there. We also want people to learn about the Waitangi Treaty Grounds so there is history about it.What I think I did well on this piece of writing was trying to not use I me we. What I can do better next time is find more information about the Waitangi Treaty Grounds.



What do you think I can do better next time? Comment down below