What do you think about my writing ?

Kia ora. This week in Te Ngahere we had an e asttle test. For this e asttle test we were writing about a Special place in our community. What I chose to write about was the the Waitangi Treaty Grounds. Here is my writing.

The Waitangi Treaty Grounds is a special place because in 1840 the first Waitangi Treaty was signed.That’s why there is a flagstaff there because that’s where the Treaty was signed.




Do you have a community place where your family can go to find out more about you town? For many families in Paihia it is the Waitangi Treaty Grounds because you get to know more about your town and more about the Waitangi treaty.




The Waitangi Treaty Grounds is special to the Paihia community because in 1840 the first treaty was signed in waitangi and the meeting house in the Waitangi treaty grounds was built on 1940 to mark 100 years since the treaty was signed. The same is true for Ngatokimatawhaorua the waka.




The Waitangi Treaty Grounds is used to keep history and to help us kids learn about the treaty.




Why the Waitangi Treaty Grounds is there because the first treaty was signed there. We also want people to learn about the Waitangi Treaty Grounds so there is history about it.What I think I did well on this piece of writing was trying to not use I me we. What I can do better next time is find more information about the Waitangi Treaty Grounds.



What do you think I can do better next time? Comment down below