lesson about how to do a blog post

Kia ora. In Te ngahere we have been learning how to do a quality blog post. We were learning about this because when we go to post on our blogs we want people to read our blog post that's why we are learning about this. We learnt that we have to have a catchy title because we want people to read our blog post and if we have a catchy title it sounds like we have a interesting blog post. Another thing we learnt is Introduction.Introduction Is importance because you want your audience reading your blog post. What I will do is say what I am learning and make my blog post more interesting and even make a DLO about my what I learning. Here is my DLO What do you think I can Improve on next time I do this?